关键点:
1) 导师们不愿听到的:
①母校不好;
②本校好考;
③父母的意愿
2) 导师们能够接受的:
① 城市魅力;
② 离家远/近;
③院校吸引力
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I prefer to study in this university for 3 reasons.
First, I love this city. 介绍这个城市独特的魅力. It is also far away from my hometown. In the past 20 years, I have never lived by myself. I would like to take this opportunity to be independent. // it is also very close to my hometown. So I can still be together with my parents and take good care of them. They are growing aged and need my accompany.
Second, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, your university enjoys a good reputation in this field. I think as one of the most famous 专 业 in our country, it provides people with enough room to get further enrichments.