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今天我们针对具体的段落,来讨论一下开头和结尾段的几种写法。我们既然要写开头段,首先要明确开头段的目的,一般来说,开头段我们需要达到这个目标:
A.引入主题:把题目中谈论的核心话题引入到我们的文章中;
注意:照抄原题不算字数,也会反映出考生有限的词汇资源;
应对策略:同义改写。
方法:
1.开门见山,直接入题
2.转折对比入题
方法1:开门见山,直接入题
例1:Manypeopleconsiderthedeathpenaltytobeappropriatepunishmentincertaincaseswhilstothersthinkthatthereisneverareasonforittobeused.Doyouagreeordisagree?
SampleAnswer:
Theissueofdeathpenaltyisanemotionalone,withmanypeopletakingtheattitudethatitneedstobeusedbothoftenandswiftlytodetercrime.Othersbelievethatinaso-called"civilized"society,thedeathpenaltyislittlemorethanbarbarism.
直接入题常用句型总结:
①Theissueof...isa/ancontroversial/sensitive/emotionalone.
②Theproblem/questionof...isnotanewone.
③Itisahot-debatedissue...
④Itisquitecommonthesedays...
⑤Thereismuchdiscussionthesedaysabout...
⑥Therehaslongbeenadebateabout...
例2:Peoplereceivealotofinformationfromnewsreportspresentedbyjournalists.However,somepeopleclaimthatwecannotbelievethenewsthatwearepresentedwith.Whatisyouropinionontheissue?Inaddition,whatqualitiesdoyouthinkjournalistsshouldhave?
SampleAnswer:
Livinginaninformationage,wearealltoooftenoverloadedwithvariousnewsinthenewspapers,ontelevisionandovertheradio.Butalargeproportionofthemprovetobeforgedorfabricated,suchastheSouthChinatigerscandalin2007.Sohowmuchcanwetrustthenewswearepresentedwith?Andwhatqualitiesshouldthejournalistshave?
例3:Theoveruseofmoderntechnologiesinrecreationalactivitiesmakeshumanbeingslesscreative.Doyouagreeordisagree?
SampleAnswer:
Inrecentyears,therehasbeenadebateaboutwhethertheuseofmodemtechnologyincreasesordecreasespeople'screativity.Ibelievemodemtechnologyhasgenerallyallowedpeopletobecomemorecreative.
方法2:转折对比入题
例1:Areportindicatesthatnowadayschildrenarebecomingmoreandmorelazy,fatandunsociable.Discussthereasonsforthisandgivesomeproposals.
SampleAnswer:
Thesocialandeconomicdevelopmentshouldhaveresultedinahappierandhealthierlifeforchildren.However,recentlyincreasinglymoreparentsareconcerningtheirchildrenhavebecomelazy,fatandunsociable.
表虚拟语气的句型:
2...shouldhave...However,...
2If...,shouldhave...