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今天小编为大家准备了雅思写作需遵循的10个核心准则,希望对大家有所帮助,接下来跟小编一起来看看吧。
1.Maketheparagraphtheunitofcomposition:oneparagraphtoeachtopic
不同的段落构成文章,每个段落仅传递一个观点
2.Asarule,begineachparagraphwithatopicsentence;enditinconformitywiththebeginning
规则:每个段落均以主题句开头,并且首尾呼应。
A.thetopicsentencecomesatornearthebeginning;
主题句前置
B.thesucceedingsentencesexplainorestablishordevelopthestatementmadeinthetopicsentence;
段落围绕主题句展开,后面的句子对主题句进行展开解释
C.thefinalsentenceeitheremphasizesthethoughtofthetopicsentenceorstatessomeimportantconsequence.
末尾句或者对主题句进行强调,或者阐述主题句带来的结果。
3.Usetheactivevoice
主动句永远比被动句直接有力
Eg:Therewereagreatnumberofdeadleaveslyingontheground
=Deadleavescoveredtheground.(清晰生动)
Eg:Thereasonthatheleftcollegewasthathishealthbecameimpaired.
=Failinghealthcompelledhimtoleavecollege.(简洁有力)
Eg:Itwasnotlongbeforehewasverysorrythathehadsaidwhathehad.
=Hesoonrepentedhiswords.(简洁有力)
4.Putstatementsinpositiveform
以肯定的形式表达否定的意思,避免使用平淡、毫无色彩,犹豫不决和含糊其辞的语言。
Eg:Hewasnotveryoftenontime.
=Heusuallycamelate.
Eg:HedidnotthinkthatstudyingLatinwasmuchuse.
=HethoughtthestudyofLatinuseless.
Eg:ThetamingoftheShrewisratherweakinspots.ShakespearedoesnotportrayKatharineasaveryadmirablecharacter,nordoesBiancaremainlonginmemoryasanimportantcharacterinShakespeare’sworks.
=ThewomeninTheTamingoftheShrewareunattractive.Katharineisdisagreeable,Biancainsignificant.
5.Omitneedlesswords
除冗词
Vigorouswritingisconcise.Asentenceshouldcontainnounnecessarywords,aparagraphnounnecessarysentences,forthesamereasonthatadrawingshouldhavenounnecessarylinesandamachinenounnecessaryparts.Thisrequiresnotthatthewritermakeallhissentencesshort,orthatheavoidalldetailandtreathissubjectsonlyinoutline,butthateverywordtell.
有力的写作一定简洁。
Owingtothefactthat
=Since(because)
Inspiteofthefactthat
=Though(although)
Callyourattentiontothefactthat
=Remindyou(notifyyou)
Thefactthathehadnotsucceeded
=Hisfailure
6.Avoidasuccessionofloosesentences
别写流水账,找找语言的逻辑关系,通过who,which,when,where,andwhile这些词把句子串起来。
7.Expressco-ordinateideasinsimilarform
Parallelstructure平行结构讲究对称美:内容对等,结构一致。
Eg:Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod,whilenowthelaboratorymethodisemployed.
Parallelstructure:Formerly,sciencewastaughtbythetextbookmethod;nowitistaughtbythelaboratorymethod.
8.Keeprelatedwordstogether
词的位置决定词的关系,所以遵循‘物以类聚’,意思关联紧密的词放在一块。
A:主谓之间不分割,补充信息需前置
Eg:Wordsworth,inthefifthbookofTheExcursion,givesaminutedescriptionofthischurch.
InthefifthbookoftheExcursion,Wordsworthgivesaminutedescriptionofthischurch.(状语前置,主谓毗邻)
B:关系代词紧随先行词出现
Eg:Therewasalookinhiseyethatbodedmischief.
Inhiseyewasalookthatbodedmischief.(名词look先行,关系词that紧随)
9.Insummaries,keeptoonetense
总结通常使用现在时态,如果使用过去时,请保持时态一致。
10.Placetheemphaticwordsofasentenceattheend
欲擒故纵的圆周句(periodicsentence)中,强调信息后置。
Eg:Fourcenturiesago,ChristopherColumbus,oneoftheItalianmarinerswhomthedeclineoftheirownrepublicshadputattheserviceoftheworldandofadventure,seekingforSpainawestwardpassagetotheIndiesassetoffagainsttheachievementsofPortuguesediscoverers,lightedonAmerica.
WiththesehopesandinthisbeliefIwouldurgeyou,layingasideallhindrance,thrustingawayallprivateaims,todevoteyourselvesunswervinglyandunflinchinglytothevigorousandsuccessfulprosecutionofthiswar.